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Tired. Walking.
Man with gray stubble beneath a frozen tree looks down at his
Nike shoes, tube socks, and says out loud to no one in particular
Show me The Way. I've walked
All of Montana and I am
Tired. The ground has been flat
And I'm tired.
He leans against a yellow Yield sign, panting, collecting thoughts.
He looks at his shoes. Sees a kid drive by in a car.
–
The Way is only what's behind.
And knowing this he walks
And follows the echoing car
And hopes that soon he'll
Find someone to talk to.
Man with gray stubble beneath a frozen tree looks down at his
Nike shoes, tube socks, and says out loud to no one in particular
Show me The Way. I've walked
All of Montana and I am
Tired. The ground has been flat
And I'm tired.
He leans against a yellow Yield sign, panting, collecting thoughts.
He looks at his shoes. Sees a kid drive by in a car.
–
The Way is only what's behind.
And knowing this he walks
And follows the echoing car
And hopes that soon he'll
Find someone to talk to.
Literature
I'm letting you go
Song for my sons that I wrote
12/22/2015
50 miles of driving rain
on the hood of my car
50 miles away from you
never seem so far
I know I've made my mistakes
I pushed you away
but see
I'm letting you go
because you mean that much to me
it'll be a sacrifice
I want you to know
it took a lot of thinking
the decision to go
It ain't something that I did on a dime
and I know somehow , someway
that over time
you'll understand the reasons why
And you'll see
That I'm letting you go
because you mean that much to me
People get to leaving
For all kinds of reasons
And many blame the other for why
But you need to see
That this time it
Literature
Way Back Home
It was so hard to believe
The detour I had to take
Was a lie I was to live
Only caused my heart to break
I couldn't do enough
I couldn't be enough
Where to go from the end of the line
The harder the strain
The greater the pain
Until reaching the limit of mine
It’s a leap of faith one chooses
To ask why not instead of why
Having run out of all excuses
No choices left except to try
Finding my way back home
I was lost, but now I’m found
Finding my way back home
I have learned to stand my ground
When not knowing who I was
It couldn’t have felt more strange
Being always at a loss
I just knew it had to change
I can do enough
Literature
I Hate Nights Like This
I hate nights like this:
Nights where the world is dark and scary and it doesn’t matter that I’m a paladin because I feel like everything I touch gets ruined in ways that would make Wreck-It-Ralph turn green with envy.
Nights when I’m alone even though I know she’s only a phone call away because she is that important to me that I’m terrified just to speak with her partly for fear or ruining her and partly for fear of fucking that up, too.
Nights when I’m powerless and not even the boldest music can bring me the least shred of strength or peace or courage and it wouldn’t matter anyways because I don
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Napowrimo 4-4 *yes it's my second one for the fourth. and yes I'm submitting this on the fifth. Just. Uuuh. Call it creative license guys. Yeah.*
This poem is.
Uuuh. Does it sound Christian? I'm not Christian.
It wasn't supposed to be. uuh.
Yeah. Well I wrote it in a couple minutes and it shows. xD Comments and critiques greatly appreciated.
This poem is.
Uuuh. Does it sound Christian? I'm not Christian.
It wasn't supposed to be. uuh.
Yeah. Well I wrote it in a couple minutes and it shows. xD Comments and critiques greatly appreciated.
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I don't think it necessarily sounds Christian. It sounds like life... we're all searching for our own 'Way'.