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Tired. Walking.

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Tired. Walking.

Man with gray stubble beneath a frozen tree looks down at his
Nike shoes, tube socks, and says out loud to no one in particular
Show me The Way. I've walked
All of Montana and I am
Tired. The ground has been flat
And I'm tired.


He leans against a yellow Yield sign, panting, collecting thoughts.
He looks at his shoes. Sees a kid drive by in a car.



The Way is only what's behind.

And knowing this he walks
And follows the echoing car
And hopes that soon he'll
Find someone to talk to.
Napowrimo 4-4 *yes it's my second one for the fourth. and yes I'm submitting this on the fifth. Just. Uuuh. Call it creative license guys. Yeah.*

This poem is.

Uuuh. Does it sound Christian? I'm not Christian.
It wasn't supposed to be. uuh.

Yeah. Well I wrote it in a couple minutes and it shows. xD Comments and critiques greatly appreciated.
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MirellaBailey's avatar
I don't think it necessarily sounds Christian. It sounds like life... we're all searching for our own 'Way'.